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 ### "Don't Hate the Media, Be the Media!"
 
 UK #indymedia, near death, was ripped in two by internal social forces - https://archive.indymedia.org.uk/. These two "victorious", blood-spattered parts promptly expired. The battle of open/closed, spiky/fluffy had NO GOOD OUTCOME. We need to remember this for the reboot.
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 ### Epicyon Codebase
 
 This "hyper-local" edition of Indymedia utilises [Epicyon](https://code.freedombone.net/bashrc/epicyon) as its codebase.
-We are always on the lookout for tools and projects that fulfil the #4Opens and #PGA Hallmarks - Epicyon nicely fits the bill.
-In particular, it is built on ActivityPub, with compatibility for RSS. This is ideal as it provides a clean basis for building a resilient, federated network, that can interact using various formats - news can be published as photos, video clips, blogs, vlogs, Mastodon "toots", etc; while remaining compatible with other IMC's who may publish using different format(s).
+Indymedia are always on the lookout for tools and projects that fulfil the #4Opens and #PGA Hallmarks - Epicyon fits the bill.
+In particular, it is built on ActivityPub, with compatibility for RSS. This is ideal as it provides a basis for building a resilient, federated network, that can interact using various formats - news can be published as photos, video clips, blogs, vlogs, Mastodon "toots", etc; while remaining compatible with other IMC's who may publish using different format(s).
 
-We shall be exploring and publishing via several "mediums" over the coming months, to provide living examples of how these tools might be utilised to re-build the [Independent Media Center Network (IMCN)](https://unite.openworlds.info/indymedia/Editorial-Collective/wiki/Home).
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+The project is exploring and publishing via several "mediums" over the coming months, to provide living examples of how these tools might be utilised to re-build the [Independent Media Center Network (IMCN)](https://unite.openworlds.info/indymedia/Editorial-Collective/wiki/Home).
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