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-Built on top of a wiki, we are useing xwiki in our codeing.
+Built on top of a wiki, we are using xwiki in our coding.
 
-Extensions
+## Extensions
 
-The coding is done with them then the membership/groups/roles are done with the wiki by API, login and signup is by wiki etc.
+The coding is done with them
+- the membership/groups/roles are done with the wiki by API
+- login and signup is by wiki etc.
 
-We program for variables, but we build the UI for this latter, we test with hand coded variables.
+We program for variables, but we build the UI for this later, we test with hand coded variables.
+**[Can we have a couple of examples of "variables"?]**
 
-We get a minim speck running then roll it out as test installs and build the UX from this experience and feedback.
+We get a minimum spec running, then roll it out as test installs and build the UX from this experience and feedback.
 
 Each person/page/group/role is a wiki page with boxes for the Extensions and an activity stream.
 
 
-Examples:
+## Examples
 
 * A proposal is simply created by clicking on the proposal extension, that creates a wiki page that can be edited by the group that created it/or admin above. This has a voting extension. Flag. Comments. Activity stream.