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-Foundation funding agenders oftern have a bad affect on open projects agenders.
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-https://decidim.org is #NGO process this like https://www.loomio.org this has been imposed lots of time in activism and has always failed. Formal process is a BAD tool for "herding cats" in social chalange/challange groups.
+Foundation funding agenders oftern have a bad affect on open projects agenders. lets brefly look at some projects https://decidim.org is #NGO process this like https://www.loomio.org this has been imposed lots of time in activism and has always failed. Formal process is a BAD tool for "herding cats" in social chalange/challange groups.
 
 Looking through https://www.loomio.org for a week and its the same ideas/workflows that were pushed onto climatecamp, indymedia and occupy in the first two case it ossified the projects in the last it was a mess.