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+**DRAFTING some thinking**
+
 We need to outreach to a devers crew - outreach.
 
 Need a website, look at what we used before, need a big BBB instance
 
-lets do the same format as last time, organised by socialhub (as a non owened space)
+let's do the same format as last time, organized by socialhub (as a non-owned space, this bit is important)
 
-Get people to do prerecored talks - upload then to conftube (or aggreated them in to the instance)
+Get people to do prerecorded talks - upload, then to conftube (or aggregated them in to the instance)
 
-- we need a consenses on what is relvent and what is not - this is both easey and very difficult - we need the easey path (#4opens)
-- format think it was 30-45 min min pre recored video
+- we need a consensus on what is relevant and what is not - this is both easy and very difficult - we need the easy path (#4opens)
+- format think it was 30-45 min min pre-recorded video
 - then a live Q&A for one hour at the event, with chat and wiki page from BBB
 
-OPTIONAL: We can have some pannals LIVE or not - I dont like these but other people do.
+OPTIONAL: We can have some Pannal LIVE or not - I don't like these, but other people do.
 
-OPTUNAL: Have a opening circal of people introduceing themselves, one min each maybe?
+OPTIONAL: Have an opening circal of people introducing themselves, one min each maybe?
 
-OPTIONAL At the end of each day we can have a open feedback session, one hour, anyone can give feedback, moderation to get a diversaty of voices (easey not hard way)
+OPTIONAL At the end of each day we can have an open feedback session, one hour, anyone can give feedback, min moderation to get a diversity of voices (done the easy not hard way)
 
 **To be thought about**
 
-We have the issue of time zones, the old events were more europe focued, we now have a much more globle and bigger numbers
+We have the issue of time zones, the old events were more Europe focused, we now have a much more globe and bigger numbers
 
-We could run 2 tracks at diffrent time zones over 2 days - the wont be perfect overlap but better than impirealisam of a singale 
-timszone.
+We could run 2 tracks at different time zones over 2 days - the won't be perfect overlap but better than imperialism of a single 
+Timezone.
 
-Much btter to get the fediy forum people onbord than running a counter event, this is likly possable.
+Much better to get the fediyforum people onboard than them running a counter event, this is likely possible, even if it is one event after the other spread over a few months.
 
 **TO KEEP IT #KISSS**
 
 
-We dont have any complex critera or excluserns, we use sinmple tools like #4opens and #openweb to dedide what is and what is not invited, in this morest things are invited, we dont get cought up in power polatics and cat fights - nobody wonts this path.
+We don't have any complex criteria or exclusions, we use simple tools like #4opens and #openweb to decide what is and what is not invited, in this most things are invited, we don't get caught up in power politics and cat fights - nobody wants this path.
 
 
-We cross the dev social devide - we PUSH this crosssing as hard as we can as this is the subject of the event and the #fedivers it self.
+We cross the dev social divide - we PUSH this crossing as hard as we can as this is the subject of the event and the #fedivers itself.