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 Foundation funding agenders oftern have a bad affect on open projects agenders.
 
-https://decidim.org is #NGO process this like https://www.loomio.org this has been imposed lots of time in activism and has always failed. Formal process is a BAD tool for "herding cats"
+https://decidim.org is #NGO process this like https://www.loomio.org this has been imposed lots of time in activism and has always failed. Formal process is a BAD tool for "herding cats" in social chalange/challange groups.
 
-Looking through https://www.loomio.org for a week and its the same ideas/workflows that were pushed onto  climatecamp, indymedia and occupy in the first two case it ossified the projects in the last it was a mess. 
+Looking through https://www.loomio.org for a week and its the same ideas/workflows that were pushed onto climatecamp, indymedia and occupy in the first two case it ossified the projects in the last it was a mess. 
 
 These #process geeks have not changed, their projects are a bad fit for life and a terrible fit for the #fediverse or actavisam. 
 
-Though they might work for #NGO and more formal #coop organising.
+Though they might work for some #NGO and more formal #coop organising.
 
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