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 This working practice comes from 30 years of building from [The Tyranny of Structurelessness](https://unite.openworlds.info/Open-Media-Network/openwebgovernancebody/wiki/The-Tyranny-of-Stuctureless---tick-box-list).
 
-Social change groups have worked in this way to challenge and change power structures on the ground. Some examples of Social change groups: from squats, protest camps, climate camps; to indymedia, Reclaim the Streets; to XR and even Occupy.<br/>
-Rainbow Gatherings are a working example of this grassroots governance. They have been going on for 50 years and the core is still based on the founding traditions which came from the Vietnam War - not the hippy dippy origins that people talk about. 
+Social change groups have worked in this way to challenge and change power structures on the ground. Some examples of social change groups: from squats, protest camps and climate camps to indymedia, Reclaim the Streets and more recently to XR and even Occupy.<br/>
+Rainbow Gatherings are a working example of this grassroots governance. They have been going for 50 years and the core is still based on the founding traditions which came from the Vietnam War - not the hippy dippy origins that people talk about. 
 
-From the perspective of a radical, grassroots, social technologist this is distilled into a codebase, as a “permissionless”  roll-out of frameworks for social groups to form and see/govern themselves.
+From the perspective of a radical, grassroots, social technologist, this is distilled into a codebase, as a “permissionless”  roll-out of frameworks for social groups to form, witness and govern themselves.
 
-Based on https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sortition and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/KISS_principle
+Based on [sortition](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sortition) and the [KISS](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/KISS_principle) principle.
 
 ## OpenWeb Governance Body