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-### learning openweb behaviour
+### Learning openweb behaviour
 
 The huge influx of people from the **#twittermigration** did not go well for our
 fluffy spiky debate project at the **#OMN**.
 About 80% of the sign-up are dormant. 90% of those left are off-topic for a
 grassroots, direct action instance.
 
-People should self-select an instance based on it's
-subject - in our case acivism and campaigning - they did not due to issues. Perhaps it
-is confusing that some instances are general-purpose, or maybe people are just
+People should self-select an instance based on it's subject - in our case
+activism and campaigning - they did not, for various reasons. Perhaps it is
+confusing that some instances are general-purpose, or maybe people are just
 too used to centralisation.
 
-The mass movement away from twitter is a great thing, we all have some
-learning to do if we are to make something better.
+The mass movement away from twitter is a great thing, we all have some learning
+to do if we are to make something better.
 
 ### Time to reorganise