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-### Unlearning centralised behaviour
+### learning openweb behaviour
 
 The huge influx of people from the **#twittermigration** did not go well for our
 fluffy spiky debate project at the **#OMN**.
 About 80% of the sign-up are dormant. 90% of those left are off-topic for a
 grassroots, direct action instance.
 
-Initially we had hoped that people would self-select an instance based on it's
-core purpose - in our case acivism and campaigning - we were wrong. Perhaps  it
+People should self-select an instance based on it's
+subject - in our case acivism and campaigning - they did not due to issues. Perhaps it
 is confusing that some instances are general-purpose, or maybe people are just
-too used to centralisation as the norm.
+too used to centralisation.
 
-The mass movement away from twitter is a great thing, but we all have some
-learning and un-learning to do if we are to make something better in the long
-term.
+The mass movement away from twitter is a great thing, we all have some
+learning to do if we are to make something better.
 
 ### Time to reorganise
 
-Our **#modteam** are going to spend a few weeks talking to active people on the
+The **#modteam** are going to spend a few weeks talking to active people on the
 instance, asking off-topic accounts to move to other instances
 (see [the-federation](https://the-federation.info/mastodon)) - there are over
 4000, covering every different subject to choose from.